Thursday 26 January 2017

Thursday's Assignment


Good afternoon everyone,
We are still working on our writing, and here is today’s task:
Choose one of the topics below or create your own. Write a paragraph using correct paragraph structure, spelling and grammar. Include a topic sentence, supporting details and a concluding sentence.
Write a paragraph to:
1.     Describe your weekend
2.     Describe your employment history
3.     Describe a significant event in your life
4.     Describe a person you know well
5.     Describe a movie or book you like

Use the rubric below to rate your own paragraph.


Not good yet
Getting Better
Excellent

Topic sentence
Topic sentence is not clear. Topic sentence is incorrectly placed.

Topic sentence is clear and is correctly placed.

Topic sentence is clear and is correctly placed.

Supporting details
There are no
supporting details about the topic sentence.

Some details support the topic sentence; some do not.

Each detail supports the topic sentence.

Grammar and
punctuation
Paragraph has several
grammar, punctuation
and spelling errors. These errors make the paragraph hard to read.


Paragraph has a few grammar, punctuation and spelling errors.

Paragraph has no
errors in punctuation,
spelling or grammar


I have similarly every weekend. On Saturday, in the morning, I prepare food for my family send my daughter, after breakfast, I send my daughter to international language school to studding Chinese. After I have a grocery shopping,  cook lunch and pick up my daughter from school.We talk about her school news and some interesting things, afternoon is her skiing class time, I watching her in ice rink and see her beautiful figure, I feel so proud ,she is growing up now. On Sunday I usually clean my home, to do the launder, and watch a movie in the afternoon, I'd like such as simple but for me is very important weekend, I can have lot of fun with my family.

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