Thursday's Assignment
Good afternoon everyone,
We are still working on our writing, and here is today’s task:
Choose one of the topics below or create your own. Write a paragraph using correct paragraph structure, spelling and grammar. Include a topic sentence, supporting details and a concluding sentence.
Write a paragraph to:
1. Describe your weekend.
2. Describe your employment history
3. Describe a significant event in your life
4. Describe a person you know well
5. Describe a movie or book you like
Use the rubric below to rate your own paragraph.
Not good yet
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Getting Better
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Excellent
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Topic sentence
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Topic sentence is not clear. Topic sentence is incorrectly placed.
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Topic sentence is clear and is correctly placed.
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Topic sentence is clear and is correctly placed.
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Supporting details
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There are no
supporting details about the topic sentence.
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Some details support the topic sentence; some do not.
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Each detail supports the topic sentence.
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Grammar and
punctuation
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Paragraph has several
grammar, punctuation
and spelling errors. These errors make the paragraph hard to read.
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Paragraph has a few grammar, punctuation and spelling errors.
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Paragraph has no
errors in punctuation,
spelling or grammar
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I have similarly every weekend. On Saturday, in the morning, I prepare food for my family send my daughter, after breakfast, I send my daughter to international language school to studding Chinese. After I have a grocery shopping, cook lunch and pick up my daughter from school.We talk about her school news and some interesting things, afternoon is her skiing class time, I watching her in ice rink and see her beautiful figure, I feel so proud ,she is growing up now. On Sunday I usually clean my home, to do the launder, and watch a movie in the afternoon, I'd like such as simple but for me is very important weekend, I can have lot of fun with my family.
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